Namaste Wesley. Your St. Patrick story is very interesting. I like your background of your story. I did the same but i had a different background. Did you have fun writing about St. Patrick ?
Kia Ora Wesley, Your explanation about St. Patrick is very good because you followed the format ms told us to do. There are some mistakes in the explanation though. You should fix the sentences so it says St. Patrick instead of St. Patricks. Only put the S at the end if its St. Patricks day or something that belongs to him. Anyways you did good. Keep up the good work. What do you think he felt like when he returned home?
Talofa Lava Wesley This is a amazing story about St. Patrick. I think that your background is outstanding. You have written a wonderful piece of writing and I think it is wonderful.
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Namaste Wesley.
Your St. Patrick story is very interesting. I like your background of your story. I did the same but i had a different background. Did you have fun writing about St. Patrick ?
Kia Ora Wesley,
Your explanation about St. Patrick is very good because you followed the format ms told us to do. There are some mistakes in the explanation though. You should fix the sentences so it says St. Patrick instead of St. Patricks. Only put the S at the end if its St. Patricks day or something that belongs to him. Anyways you did good. Keep up the good work. What do you think he felt like when he returned home?
Talofa Lava Wesley
This is a amazing story about St. Patrick. I think that your background is outstanding. You have written a wonderful piece of writing and I think it is wonderful.
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