Improving my Recount Writing

Thank You letter To Ms Parkes

24 September 2015

Dear Ms Parkes

Thank you for helping us improve our writing. Thank you for your suggestions and your kindness to us.

I enjoyed listening to you teach us ideas to improve our writing. I enjoyed writing the diamante poem because it was easy and fun. I think I am doing well in my writing.

Simple sentences are easy for me. I  can use quotation marks probably in my writing. I understand paragraphs and punctuation.

But I need more practise with my complex and compound sentences. Next term I would like to be in your writing group again. So I can improve my writing grades.

I appreciate you taking  your time just to come and help us with our writing.

Yours sincerely

Wesley

Attribute

While planting oak trees at the park, Wesley, Alyssa and I found a old dirty lamp. I decided to wipe the dirt off the lamp when suddenly a blue genie appeared and said he would grant us three wishes. Each of us was allowed one wish.

Alysa

For my wish I choose Honesty. I have chosen Honesty because I don’t lie if it is bad. I want to start telling the truth to my family and friends and not to lie at home either. I should also start to compliment people not for the sake of it. Also when I witness something bad I have to discourage it or if it is really bad I get a teacher. I should do this by hanging out with honesty people.  

Wesley

My wish is I want to be diligent . If I’ll be diligent  I will  give 100% in school work,  constantly  be busy by doing my work and homework and I will be attentive. I will do my work and not get distracted by the others in class. I have shown diligence in room 9. I am going to work even harder.

Ifa

I said, “Genie my wish is to be Loyal to my friends.” I am loyal to my parents at home. I help them at home with the dishes and cleaning our house. I am also loyal to my Nana because she is old. Everytime she goes to hang out by herself I go with her to check

if she is ok. Lastly I am loyal to my friends at school. I stick up for my friend Dion when ever he gets bullied by the boys in Room nine and ten. Sometimes when I try help Dion they would get their friends from room 12 and then they start wanting to fight. So I just need to not be very aggressive when I stick up for my friends or else it would get overboard. I also need to help my parents everyday instead of three days a week.

After that, the Genie gave us the three wishes. The blue genie disappeared back into the old lamp. We were all happy after that day.

Robin Williams

Walt: write a paragraph

Robin Williams is an actor. He was in all sorts of movies. He was in my niece's favourite movie Happy feet part 1 and part 2. He  was the voice of lovelace in Happy feet.  He  came to NZ in 1999 for a Maori  welcome.  He was born July 21 1951.  But  he died at the age of   63.

He  is from  Chicago, Illinois, United States. He  is entertaining because he  is funny and he makes me laugh.

Bats

Walt: Research Bats.

1. Bats can fly at speed of 60 mph per hour.

2. The bats can find their food at night time .

3. There are more than 1,000 species in the whole wide world.

4. Also that the bats can eat up to 1,200 mosquitoes an hour.

5. In united states more than half the bats species are endangered.

6. Wow bats can live until 30 years.

7. The worlds biggest flying bat is the flying fox bat.

8. There are vampire bats.They live from the blood of the other animals.  

9. There are forty species that live in united states

10. A bat is a warm blooded  animals because the bat is a mammal

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