24 September 2015
Dear Ms Parkes
Thank you for helping us improve our writing. Thank you for your suggestions and your kindness to us.
I enjoyed listening to you teach us ideas to improve our writing. I enjoyed writing the diamante poem because it was easy and fun. I think I am doing well in my writing.
Simple sentences are easy for me. I can use quotation marks probably in my writing. I understand paragraphs and punctuation.
But I need more practise with my complex and compound sentences. Next term I would like to be in your writing group again. So I can improve my writing grades.
I appreciate you taking your time just to come and help us with our writing.
Yours sincerely
Wesley
1 comments:
Talofa Lava Wesley,
I think Ms Parkes made our writing better. I can read my story and fix up mistakes and also add new words in my writing. Working with her was also fun. I hope you learned a lot from her. What did you find hard working with her?
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