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Tuesday 12 March 2013

wear blue shoes to school

My New Shoes.

ARGUMENT: [ Say what your new shoes has to be like - blue in this case] START:
My new shoes has to be blue because it is the school rules.

REASON 1.  [Give one reason. And then say something more about THAT reason.]
Firstly it has to be blue because you will be in trouble and then you will sit at the office.


REASON 2:  [Give one reason. And then say something more about THAT reason.]
Next if you don’t wear blue shoes at school then you will be in big big trouble the big big trouble is to go and sit in the cold wind.


REASON 3.  [Give one reason. And then say something more about THAT reason.]
Finally, if you bring blue shoes then you will not be in trouble.

Conclusion.  {Say again what your new shoes has to be like.} your shoes has to be blue because if you don’t then you have to do a very hard work so remember wear blue shoes to school it is up to you do you want to do the hard work or are you going to wear blue shoes to school  .

All about me


Hi my name is Wesley. I go to Glen Innes school. I live in Glen Innes. My caring friends are Tamim Ifa Pareata, Siua and lastly  Kaufana. My hobby at home is playing x  box 360 sometimes I play with my friends outside. Most  of all I am a samoan and a kiwi. I  am a year 6 and I am 10 year old. I like to eat carl’s Jr  and Mc Donald’s it is really nice .