Hello Wesley, Your ebook is good but there was many sentences that did not makes sense. When you have a chance to edit your work, you should fix your ebook. It was good though. Keep up the good work. What did you like about the athletics?
Kia Orana Wesley, your ebook about the athletics was very interesting. There were lots of kids coming first and second. I came second in the long jump. I am not very good at the rest of the events. How many events did you come first in?
Kia ora Wesley Your ebook about you run the 400 meter sprint was interesting. Were you tired when you ran? I did long jump and I came first. What did you come for 400 meter sprints?
I made a presentation about athletics as well. I liked how you used plenty of photos and wrote your story in children's language. Did you know that, not a lot of schools have the 5 and 6 year olds run 200 meters? What sports did you come first in?
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Hello Wesley,
Your ebook is good but there was many sentences that did not makes sense. When you have a chance to edit your work, you should fix your ebook. It was good though. Keep up the good work. What did you like about the athletics?
Kia Orana Wesley, your ebook about the athletics was very interesting. There were lots of kids coming first and second. I came second in the long jump. I am not very good at the rest of the events. How many events did you come first in?
Kia ora Wesley Your ebook about you run the 400 meter sprint was interesting. Were you tired when you ran? I did long jump and I came first. What did you come for 400 meter sprints?
Kia Ora Wesley
I made a presentation about athletics as well. I liked how you used plenty of photos and wrote your story in children's language. Did you know that, not a lot of schools have the 5 and 6 year olds run 200 meters? What sports did you come first in?
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