Walt: write a recount with focus on expensive words
One freezing morning. We had a softball tournament at 9:30. Everyone was cold. It felt like antarctica. The softball tournament was held at Dunkirk .
First we warmed up. Next we got out the equipment and started to throw ball around. Everyone was eye-opened to the final against Ruapotaka. I was pitching everyone was telling me to pitch fast so Ruapotaka does not make any home runs. So I started pitching fast everyone was cheering for the finals. The softball tournament was fundamental to us.
Next the umpire said to us that it is our turn to go bat now. As we sat down into our batting line up Mrs barry told me to bat forth so that I can try and bring two home runs. So I did two home runs. We won the the softball tournament for 2015 everyone was cheering for us. We were Champions. Everyone was celebrating.
After that we scurried like a cheetah to the school van.
“Everyone, came to me and said well done Wesley that was a great game. Then we were on the way back to school. Everyone was exhausted from the softball game. As we arrived to school I shared the news with my class and my teacher. My was so proud of myself and my teammates. Ruapotaka did not have any home runs. Mrs barry was so proud of the softball team.
Finally the softball tournament was over, everyone was exhausted from the softball tournament.
The next day I felt the pain in my shoulder from pitching.
